Mixing Business & Pleasure Ch. 02

Any update on the status of chapter 3 or will there not be one?

It's a shame you chose not to add additional chapters to this story.

Amazing

Couldn't stop reading. I was wanting to be her. I hope you finish her journey and take us where you want it to go. Please finish her journey. Great story

Outstanding story! Love the characters and very well written. Would love to see a follow up to this or a conclusion.

So I well written, but the second half, the roof was a right avatars 3*

The writing is excellent but I really hated the second part. Firstly the professor is a real bastard who treats people like scum. He is a disgusting human being. Secondly the wife has two children whose whole future she has put in jeapordy. Didn't she consider them in this disgusting alliance? Thirdly we have a loving husband who trusts his wife but who is treated with nothing but contempt. Why didn't he immediately turn round, recover his luggage and head home on the next flight. Alternatively, pick up the poker from the fireplace and smash it into the bastard's balls.

I really hated this one.

The action between Lauren & WIlliam is hot. But the Husband brings so much awkwardness to all interactions. Husband & Wife both act like they dont want to the situation to continue but then they never do anything, cant decide anything for themselves. Their interactions always produce negative emotions. It ruins the story. Tried to ignore the Husband parts in the story but it was difficult.

The end of story is left open too. Do Lauren & Husband accept William as their bull ? What do they discuss ? What about possibility of pregnancy . No resolution to all these points.

Thanks for this exciting story. I think that it would have been better for William to have commenced his influence and subsequent domination of Lauren at the beginning of her visit. This would have given him a couple of weeks to develo her into the lady she became. Thanks for you excellent writing

The writing is great from William n Lauren's perspective. Really erotic. But the husband really comes off as meek. He is neither into this nor repelled by this. Doesn't try to have any one on one time with his wife ? Or make any remark to challenge William ? He is like a doormat basically. Doesn't even seem excited at any point.

I didn't care for this chapter as much as I did the first because I prefer stories of a stag/vixen type of relationship, rather than the cuckold/being humiliated type of relationship between a husband and wife. I also missed the rough sexual handling of the wife that you described in your first chapter with the appropriate dialogue you included, but apparently the wife's reluctance vanished somewhere on the second day. I would have preferred for the husband to have discovered his wife's infidelity through text messages or videos he discovered from the professor and then being left to either divorce his wife or forgive her, rather than viewing it directly and not objecting. I also find nothing appealing about a human life being brought into this world by a selfish, arrogant prick, but in the end it is your tale and it was well-written, so I will give you 4 stars.

I'm really not a racist but it kind of looked like it when Dan Robertson a district manager with our company was flirting with Jessica my wife. He was a large black guy and looked like he probably played football in college I really didn't know. We were at a company party being held in a large Hotel it had a large party room spas hot tubs saunas large pool. Dan had flirted with Jessica in the past and I had talked to her about it. I told her that I would not tolerate it. She said she understood but she did not want to cause a scene and possibly calls me to lose my job. I said I really like my job but I didn't love my job I love my wife. We were alone several people in the pool area. At the time Jessica and I were visiting with different groups. I noticed that then had worked his way over to the group that Jessica was visiting with. After standing there for a bit he put his arm around Jessica's waist and she politely pushed it away. It wasn't long before he done it again. This time she looked at him and pushed it away again. I was working my way over towards them. As I was headed there I stopped briefly and told my boss David Alexander that he should be looking for someone to replace me because I would not work for a company that employed people like Dan. David was actually the manager that I answered to. He asked what I meant by that? I said just watch him and walked away. He was saying we needed to talk before I quit. I didn't even acknowledge his statement. Just as I was just a few feet away from Jessica and Dan he grabbed her butt and squeezed it she jerked away and slapped his face just as I tackled him and took him into the pool I was like a ratcoon on a dog in the water. I had seen a ratcoon ground a dog when I was hunting with my oldest brother. The ratcoon just hung on to the dogs head and kept it under water and drowned the dog. I was pulled off of him by hotel security. Someone else helped Dan. Trying to shorten the story Dan was let go. I was offered his job but turned it down. I didn't want to travel that much and be away from my family. I also heard Dan was having marriage problems. Serves him well.

A highly erotic and sophisticated series. On the contrary, is well conceived and composed. Please continue!

The,author and story are fucked up. .needs a rewrite, regardless of whether this author approves...

DOL

I didn't particularly care for the story in that I find it difficult to believe their are husbands who would allow any other man to disrespect him to this degree. However, I sure there are readers who enjoy stories of this nature. What does displease me, however, is the ignorant and negative comment submitted by clearly an uneducated bigoted man; i.e., reference to Black men unable to be a university professor. That comment clearly demonstrates the lack of intelligence of this "anonymous" individual and I'm sure he will tell you the last election was rigged! Reading his comment made me remember the saying of "it's better to let other think you are ignorant than to open your mouth and remove any doubt" or in this case write something dumb.

Excellent story, please continue. She has to get piercings, stay tanned, no underwear, recruit other women/ girls