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Click hereGlancing back towards Michael, William remarked, "You've got a little hotwife now."
Michael said nothing yet looked on as his young bride serviced her muscular lover. Dutifully, she licked clean his semi-erect yet still impressive manhood.
Looking down at the other man's petite wife, William smiled, "Isn't that right, baby?" running a hand down her pale white back. "You need a bull, don't you?" and drawing a soft moan from Lauren. Chuckling softly at her response, "Yeah. This is my little pussy, now." Then running his hand across Lauren's stomach, he remarked, "I'm going to love filling it up."
Speaking almost to himself, William said, "Just keep this wife of yours ready for me, Michael. I'll take good care of her."
Couldn't stop reading. I was wanting to be her. I hope you finish her journey and take us where you want it to go. Please finish her journey. Great story
Outstanding story! Love the characters and very well written. Would love to see a follow up to this or a conclusion.
The writing is excellent but I really hated the second part. Firstly the professor is a real bastard who treats people like scum. He is a disgusting human being. Secondly the wife has two children whose whole future she has put in jeapordy. Didn't she consider them in this disgusting alliance? Thirdly we have a loving husband who trusts his wife but who is treated with nothing but contempt. Why didn't he immediately turn round, recover his luggage and head home on the next flight. Alternatively, pick up the poker from the fireplace and smash it into the bastard's balls.
I really hated this one.
The action between Lauren & WIlliam is hot. But the Husband brings so much awkwardness to all interactions. Husband & Wife both act like they dont want to the situation to continue but then they never do anything, cant decide anything for themselves. Their interactions always produce negative emotions. It ruins the story. Tried to ignore the Husband parts in the story but it was difficult.
The end of story is left open too. Do Lauren & Husband accept William as their bull ? What do they discuss ? What about possibility of pregnancy . No resolution to all these points.
Thanks for this exciting story. I think that it would have been better for William to have commenced his influence and subsequent domination of Lauren at the beginning of her visit. This would have given him a couple of weeks to develo her into the lady she became. Thanks for you excellent writing
The writing is great from William n Lauren's perspective. Really erotic. But the husband really comes off as meek. He is neither into this nor repelled by this. Doesn't try to have any one on one time with his wife ? Or make any remark to challenge William ? He is like a doormat basically. Doesn't even seem excited at any point.
I didn't care for this chapter as much as I did the first because I prefer stories of a stag/vixen type of relationship, rather than the cuckold/being humiliated type of relationship between a husband and wife. I also missed the rough sexual handling of the wife that you described in your first chapter with the appropriate dialogue you included, but apparently the wife's reluctance vanished somewhere on the second day. I would have preferred for the husband to have discovered his wife's infidelity through text messages or videos he discovered from the professor and then being left to either divorce his wife or forgive her, rather than viewing it directly and not objecting. I also find nothing appealing about a human life being brought into this world by a selfish, arrogant prick, but in the end it is your tale and it was well-written, so I will give you 4 stars.