All Comments on 'Modeling'

Why the long paragraphs?

Impossible to rwad on cellphone

First time I've heard that complaint. I'll monitor that more closely, don't want you to have trouble rwading...

Keep it coming. Well written

I liked the "long paragraphs" - even on my cell phone. You have a nice way with words, very expressive.

I chuckled at the last bit.

Hopefully, to be continued, yes.

I wonder how Ed will react

after that revelation.

Nice twist at the end. Keep on with the story please. No problem with pg length.

Funny. This is the first time in a long while that I've seen a paragraph longer than two sentences.

Nice work.

I'm thinking Sharon and Ed model as a couple. Just a thought, I'm sure you have it all planned out already.

I did feel embarrassed for Ed, he seems to be growing into the roll. Will he be available for next time, and was he always going to be the model ?

Pretty good depiction of what I'm thinking a modeling class might be like. Xoxoxox Annette