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Click hereLaura did just that as he got under the covers and threw her arms over Jen's body. Jen's own hands went around the tall woman's waist as she basked in the feeling of her lover's body. Laura looked down at Jen and thought about how lucky she was to have her, any thought about her job was far from her mind. She leaned down her head and gave Jen's forehead a tender kiss, "Good night, baby, I love you." She only waited long enough to hear her wife's reply before she lost herself to a deep sleep holding Jen in her arms.
"I love you too, Laura, good night," came Jen's reply from below.
The blonde girl was equally tired but took a bit longer to find the sleep she craved. She had not cum earlier tonight and had been pretty turned on during their talk about what she had thought could only ever be a fantasy. As she finally drifted off to sleep her thoughts were split. She thought about the warm embrace of her wife and the divine feelings that she got from the mere closeness of her body. But, she also thought about the talk they had and the change in which they had agreed for their relationship. Particularly, Jen's thoughts dwelled on a certain redhead beauty that she'd be seeing again on Monday morning at work.
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 1 year agoIf it's intended for this intro to be a framing device for a superporny fuckfest series of stories in which Jen and Laura fix their problems, then it's been written with far too much literary quality and sense of realism. OTOH, if the author is going to continue placing these as believable characters acting in a real world way then I tend to agree with Thorlol that this is a picture of a seriously unhealthy decision in response to a realtionship on life support and the only reasonable place to go from here is a long miserablist description of that relationship dying.
Migbirdover 1 year agoLike the premise behind the storyline and your characters are well developed, believable including how you brought each to current state of mind. Hesitate to weigh in on aspects of storyline like Laura not sharing work trouble especially after Jen recognizes something troubling her or the ease with which they entertain sex outside their marriage — hey, got to have a story/drama and the last line adds suspense. My only criticism is the amount of background narrative which dominates much of this first chapter. I understand that you must set the stage, but so little actual dialogue/engagement between main characters detracts/hard to sustain attention. That said, I am looking forward to where you take this troubled relationship — a relationship with a strong beginning between two women with agency. 4 stars.
Thorlolover 1 year agoHuh, the writing is good but the content is questionable. So their sex life is abysmal due to various reasons like their jobs and also communication, but mostly their jobs. They also seem to still have a lot of desire for each other. But instead of solving the problems they have recognized they go the exact opposite way and dont solve them but source out their sex life? How the fuck should that help their marriage? Add some other problems like not being able to tell your partner that you might not have a job anymore in the future or not even being able to tell your partner about your fantasies after 7 years. I really have problems to get into that mindset to follow the story.
