All Comments on 'Modified Ch. 13'

Thank you for writing such a sexy, sensual, and erotic series !! Yes, you have made mistakes, guess what, you are human !! As opposed to the first comments on this chapter of a wonderful story, please, continue writing...I am sure that others are enjoying this just as much as I am !!

psst....Andi needs a hot suit, so does Fiona if she is going to hang out with this crowd. I can see that being a part of a future chapter.

The author seemed like he was in a hurry to get this one out. Many more typos and garbles than in previous chapters. And I learned a new word! Demiurge. However, it does not mean "demure". It actually refers to a being, subordinate to God, who is responsible for running the physical universe that God created.

demiurge should have been demure? first word comes up as a Platonic God. https://www.google.com/search?client=opera&q=demiurge&sourceid=opera&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8