All Comments on 'Mollie from Montana Ch. 04'

This is a fun story. I think you are having as much fun writing it as we are reading it. Thanks.

This series is all very well and well merits maximum points,just one thing what has happened to the "stocking top maniac"Not f.....,his mom has he?

Double, double, toil and trouble; fire burn, and cauldron bubble. All Mollie and Elaine need is the cauldron. They are witches/bitches.

Mr. Grigor,

You have a great talent in creating interesting stories. - BUT -

Didn't you just know there HAD to be a "-BUT-" ?

It seems obvious to me that you are not a native American. That is NOT a criticism. It is just an observation. You really do need a good editor with a good education in American grammar and colloquial verbiage.

Please continue to give us the benefit of you superb talents.

Sincerely,

deJay

. . .to write fascinating stories but please find a good proofreader to edit for grammatical typo's.

de Jay