All Comments on 'Mollified Magic Ch. 02'

Love it. Looking forward to Salem trip and her home life.

Great build up and educational teaching story. Thanks more please.

Why did she say that? They were really getting along very well... PLEASE CONTINUE! 10 stars!

Odd turn, but curious to see how this plays out.

I thought this story was excellent before but you just ratcheted it up a few levels. Talk about something coming out of nowhere. I don’t even know what to say aside from great job on another chapter which is hard enough to say after having your mind blown. Feel free to make and post more chapters as fast as humanly possible since I have to know more!

love the new twist

Great character development, I am loving it so far. Keep up the good work.

P.S. I am very jealous of your writing. Your work is amazing, a whole lot better than mine when I started out.

Just as good as Chapter One. My, I'm enjoying this!

GR8 stuff . I am enjoying it .

Love the story.

Intriguing. I was just beginning to wonder why it was in the Sci Fi and Fantasy section :-)