All Comments on 'Molly Ch. 01'

Fun story and well written. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Great twist at the end!!!!!! Chapter2 please.

Wonderful story, very hot.

BUT…

Please try to stay in past tense. You start in present tense (a difficult narrative voice to maintain), switch to past and then occasionally slip back into present.

Clean that up and you have a near perfect story.

Good ending

HOT HOT HOT. Chapter 2?

Very hot! If there's a next chapter, let's have Tanner lick her pussy after her father has cum in it! Five stars and a favorite point!

Mr. K. seems a mature, very sexy man -- Molly loves his cock, and touching him, caressing his pubic hair, and playing with his cock though his silk shorts. When they're kissing and rubbing themselves, together, haw about some sexy chest hair for Mr. K. I imagine her boobs caressing his naked chest, and nestling into his sexy chest hair. You've got a great sexy story here!

Hot AF!

PITCH FUCKING PERFECT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you for a very fun story!!

I wish you a Happy New Year!

Paul

5 Stars. Great story I assume follow up stories will include Tanner and her dad and Molly and Tanner's mom too.

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!

1-888-YUMM

Lovely surprise at the end.