All Comments on 'Mom and Aunt Need My Help Pt. 03'

There are lots of authors here who are not native English writers but they do make serious attempts to get the language right using online tools or an editor or simply working hard to improve their style of writing.

Your “take it or leave it” attitude of dismissing the readers isn’t going to get you discerning readers or good ratings. Well, your choice…

It is very difficult to read / follow.

They enjoyed the soap in their mouths? Really?

Your grammar is fine