All Comments on 'Mom and My Twin Brother... Pt. 01'

Now this is hot and it'll probably only get hotter with each chapter. Just don't let Steve out of the family play for too long, give him a nice date but then bring him bad to the family bedroom. The rest will be taken care of beforehand :)

5* easily.

Sorry I dissagree with the other comment, I think a whole chapter, or even 2, describing the parrallel paths of Chris & Mum and Steve & Brenda with the boys discussing their moves and plans.

Then when brenda is off the scene the roles get reversed, Steve & Mum and Chris & Gwen continue in the next chapter.

Then the threesomes begin, first with Mum then with other girls which will be easy as you have already hinted at the identity switch.

that was the hottest lead to, I hope, many more chapters to follow! mom and brothers sharing each other together is my hope!

good job!

they gay part is too much when i saw the tittle i thougt 1 of the brothers was gonna catch his mom & brother going at it but it turned into gay people giving each other bj's

i hope the gay parts stop & that only 1 brother gets to fuck the mom & the gets jalouse and wants to have sex too but the other brotherthat fucks mom won't share

causing a litlle drama

As someone who swims a lot in a pool, I agree the writer is correct. Too many dudes showing off.

While the bj part was initially off-putting, I understand that it was the prelude to what happens with their mother... and to be fair, we were warned.

Let's hope that the second part is not long in coming.

I thought your story was great stared with two brothers experimenting n then bringing mom in is great very hot very erotic and for the one who said do away with the gay part WTF it's incest dummy family doing family get a clue dude

I hope parts 2 and more (?) won't be too long in coming.

Very interesting and hot story; unusual to have gay action turning to het, so well done for tackling that.

Is part 2 ever going to be posted?

This is the hottest and most ideal setting for my taste, so hoping this gets a second part, such an amazing setting, can anyone else suggest a similar longer story??

Great story, brilliant setting. Waiting for part 2....

It seems that the author has posted the second part.