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All Comments on 'Mom Dad Anyone Please HELP! Ch. 01'

by Thundertickler

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debbie2freedebbie2freeabout 5 years ago
Who in hades passed this?

First off I have no idea what editor let this be posted. Between run on sentences, horrid grammar and situation changing be it location or gender. This story trully needs to be redone. It could be more humor as there is no horror, there is incest and non consent

SexlessStiffSexlessStiffabout 5 years ago
Agree

I agree with Debbie. This story should have never made it to "print".

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
What the heck is this?

So who wrote this, a twelve year old?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This sucked

Story line made NO sense, do us all a favor and never post again

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