This story is jumping all over the place. Too many characters and no consistent theme. Reads like you're trying too hard, I'd suggest slowimg the pace down a little
March 13, 2024: I've submitted more chapters of "Mother in Heat," but there's apparently a backlog in posting approvals. I hope it will be available here within the next day or two. Thanks for your patience! March 7, 2024: I've submitted Part 1 of "Mother in Heat" to Literoti...