by rp_fun
JUST WRITE THE STORY ALREADY! The form breaks the momentum - the flow of the fantasy. Do the work if you want to be a writer, otherwise why are you bothering?
If ignorance is bliss, you are probably the happiest person on the planet.
You should really give up any thoughts of being a writer. This story REALLY sucked. Had to give 1 star but should have been none.
this is one of the worse stories I have ever read. just write a story, this is not working.