by Djmac1031
Another successful story!
Erotic & nurturing, that's what I am when I take the role of Mommy for My pet.
I also teach him when I'm in that role.
It's a role that comes easy for me, and being his Mistress I'm in control.
At times he's a naughty boy & needs to be punished... and I teach him to control his orgasms, denying when it's for his own good. My boy loves when I don't let him cum ;)
I was expecting him to declare his love for her
and they hook up.
They’ve clearly missed each other.
Great! Great dialogue, very vivid. And the 'After my abuela...' part is a masterpiece. Oh... I was wondering: in some respects would it be taggable as "FINDOM"? In a way, she dominates him economically, even if the bargaining over a monopoly relationship does not have the desired outcome.
More, more! Not just sequels, but more flashbacks to years gone by. For example, what was the striptease like? With music, or without, only stripping, or also dressing?
She forced him to be a good guy, OK: but what would she have done if he had confessed that he was not? A real Mexican Mami would have thrown a 'zapata' on his head (a wooden clog) - just kidding, of course, never violence.
I enjoyed this, took the usual trope of the work obsessed alpha who needed to be controlled even if he didn't realize it. The power dynamic was well played. Sophia called the shots, but in an easy going way, which to me has always been more impressive than full on demeaning femdom. Also explored the subconscious desire for a "Mom" even when you hated yours and how that hatred could lead to an odd sexual crossing of the wires.
I think his craving to have her as his own, not being happy with being told no when she had another client, but willing to wait for her was telling. He could not buy or control her as he had everything else, which in the end is part of why he never tired of her(IMO) and it showed how professional she was and avoided getting close.
Loved the ending where they share a drink as 'friends' but of course we're going to feel they could become more now that she was retired.
5 stars. Sorry, I know you said you'd consider it an honor if I tore you up, but what can I say? It's a good story. :)