All Comments on 'Mommy Loves You, Papito'

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Very nice. Good descriptions of emotion and affection. 5/5

@Jonboy12345678910

This was supposed to be a simple short story with a clear beginning and end. But, now that I think about it, I can make this into a series if I put my mind to it.

I'm writing a short story as well as a new chapter for Fucking Sisters for Power, but when I get the chance, I'll see if I can cook up a good second chapter for this one :)

Thank you for being here. Means a lot 👍

Short, but sweet. Thanks

Better. More Realistic

Well done!