All Comments on 'Mommy's Secret Lover'

The unencumbered want mother to be sexually fulfilled

So, who’s the secret lover?

Well done first ever story; I do hope you continue this storyline and write others as well.

You have potential .

Story needs proofing and editing.

Keep on writing

Good and sexy start

Good start. He needs to have the lover and his Mom.

Scarey stuff! !s his mother the chief witch in the local coven? Is the narrator a dirty little `Nosey Parker? When will our narrator wind himself up enough to ask Mommie the necessary questions? I think we should be told ……Sorry to be so inquisitive!

A good start to your story but you left it unfinished hopefully you add more chapters

curious

Hope you make this into a series as it's a bit unfinished. Good start and plenty of potential ways his could go.

That was terrific! Hope the next chapter results in hot sex with plenty of erotic talk?

Obviously, the girl liked being watched. My first thought was of her sucking my cock, while she rode tge strapon.

Nice story but where's the incest that's what this site is!!! A 4

Didn't like it , where's the incest?????????????? 2 stars