by charlieflemming
Morning on up to the east side, goina git mysef aahhh.... Deluxe Villa. Moving on.. Zzz...
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First of, like the way you write. You've got talent.
These characters tho .. many are rude for no reason, Lexi and Sally bordering on obnoxious. Selfish how sis n mom dismiss MC after their Os as if blue balls weren't a problem. In short, MC comes of as a doormat. Please keep writing though!