All Comments on 'Mom's Family Villa Pt. 03'

by charlieflemming

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Fastcar88Fastcar889 months ago

I'm loving this new story line. Please keep it going.

oksideshow859419oksideshow8594196 months ago

Morning on up to the east side, goina git mysef aahhh.... Deluxe Villa. Moving on.. Zzz...

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addi01edaddi01ed17 days ago

First of, like the way you write. You've got talent.

These characters tho .. many are rude for no reason, Lexi and Sally bordering on obnoxious. Selfish how sis n mom dismiss MC after their Os as if blue balls weren't a problem. In short, MC comes of as a doormat. Please keep writing though!

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