All Comments on 'Mom's Friend Takes Control Pt. 06 - Final'

Final? Well there really was no details of his training and he was not punished as far as I could tell. Did he ever get up to 5 minutes? I guess you had to put an ending to this fairly good story but it just ended with a thud. Maybe you are working on another similar story?

Jeez, really disappointed with the outcome of these teasing nightmares!!!

Seemed like an abrupt ending of a story that deserved more exploration!

Maybe these stories just aren't my thing, but I dislike femdom stories that lack compassion and kindness. First, the small dick shaming is not sexy, I'm tired of the inadequate lover trope, and the tease and denial and ruined orgasms aren't sexy for me either. I know that you don't write stories with me in mind,, and that some readers dig cruel mistress stories. Why is she treating his cum like its disgusting? No wonder her husband split. I like a bit of gentle femdom, but not this.

Good series. I've enjoyed it as the tale unfolded.

As a reader, I'm learning to be more supportive of authors. I truly appreciate your sharing your gifts and efforts with us.

The thing is, the start of this final chapter seemed to fast forward through a lot of really erotic scenes. Then at the end, when his Mom & Mommy were both together and in on the whole deal, it just ended. Just... it seemed like there was a lot more, almost like I'd just watched a preview to a movie, and now I want to go see it.

Of course, this means that you told the tale very well. Thanks.

I loved it , and at the end i had my sad little stiffy pleading for a twist and the real mommy provided , as she walked towards her room she overheard momy sharon ofering her little man the full hand job and she felt a rage inside she had not anticipated and an awfully wrong urge to out do this pretend mom ,she grabs a shower and whilst she is in the shower she ask sharon to send her little man in to dry his moms feet ,sharon is out in the kitchen preparing dinner as i enter the bathroom my real mom is stood with one foot on the edge of the bath exposing her cunt ,i go to dry her feet but mom in a low growling voice says "you have licked her ass hole , you should be trying to make real mum cum , l would allow you a full squirty every time you made me cum i cant hide my stiff winky is leaking , mom hands me a large thick dildo and growls make your fathers boss hard and help him fill moms big hole and watch all the dirty details ,your father will enjoy hearing you retell this moment .As i hungrilly slurped on the huge dick mom had my stiff and my tight little sack fully in her mouth she spat all of my small manhood out pulled my skin right back andcomanded one of u is built for my pussy ,she bend over the sink and shouts "fuck my desperate cunt , push it up my cunt son and then x.ip your little man up momys little hole and rutt mommy until i say stop...whoops thats as far as i got

This was fabulous! I've read others critiques but have to disagree, other than I need more haha! I get it, and I liked it all, except the real mom part but thats just not my thing I know some people are into those kinds of stories so not a critique! I think it was really great! Looking forward to other stories you write!

You vividly described every feeling and experience Eddie had with Sharon, until it was time to actually pleasure her. Very well done. But hen you skipped forward and just kinda summed it up with very little detail. No description of the way it felt, smelled or tasted for him, or how he learned, or how he thought in the moment. I was really looking forward to that. Bummer.

This last story could have been a two or three page story if only you'd have had the ability to own it.

More description of his going down on Sharon. How she squirted on his face. What happened when he fucked her? Did she ride him?

As for his Mom she was obviously dominant as well so why not get her involved?

A poorly ended and disappointing result.

HOT story!!!