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by dnick47

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

LOTS of misspellings, and other errors.

When you finish a story, set it aside for a couple of days, then reread it. You'll see, and be able to correct most of your errors.

KinPAKinPAover 1 year ago

He went from not having a steady girlfriend at the start to having one at the end. Continuity, spelling, grammar, and editing…this needs it.

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I write stories for entertainment. I do my best to dot my 'i's and cross my 't's, but I gave my grammar guide before I retired, so cut me some slack. At 74 there isn't a lot that I use to cherish doing that I am now capable of doing owing to a bad back. So to all of you fru...