All Comments on 'Moms Weekend Getaway with Her Son'

threw = through

call a spellchecker

do not make a paragraph out of every sentence

Rough grammar. Liked the plot tbough.

Mom's a fucking tease. Hope he fucks the shit out of her.

Terrible grammar. Two paragraphs in and had to stop reading

IMO, should be under "Fetish" category - smoking is the main theme here. Totally uninteresting to anyone not a smoker fetish follower.

I enjoy reading your stories, but they could all use a final editing pass to get rid of typos and other little fiddly bits.

Great story. Ignore the grammar Nazis. It's not like they're potential publishers for your first book. They're just wannabes who don't have anything better to do.

So many errors throwing the story off, and in the end he gets a bj, to go with his smoking fetish? No physical description nothing else. A waste of time.

1/2 a fetish story. Not amused and not really erotic and FOR SURE not finished. Don't submit until you have finished a story.

Ohhhh! Wonderful! What a lucky son, being able to cuddle with his mother while she smokes. But that was just the beginning. A mother, her cigarettes, and her son. This seems like the beginning of a smoky, happily-ever-after story. I hope you write more.

Not a bad start on a better story, but you need to continue with them having a sexual encounter in the hotel and continue when they get home! You never gave names or ages! Gave it 3 stars it was to short!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just an average story with not much incest just a mothers half a bj. And way too short only a 3