All Comments on 'Monogamish - Bachelorette Party Day 02'

by Publius68

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CZOFTWCZOFTW7 months ago

I'm bummed that we didn't get to see the Amy/Biggins fuckfest but really enjoying the story. I'm looking forward to see how she and Todd's partnership develops.

ActingupActingup7 months ago

Definitely curious to see how you’re going to change it up from here!

nylookingnylooking7 months ago

I can see many future chapter possibilities!

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

I love the story. A swingers slant would be awesome. Please no cheating partners.

BayhuskerBayhusker7 months ago

I do like your writing, and your style, but please try to keep track of ancillary character names (Blondie/Goldie, Max/Rex in particular). Thank you for your work!

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4-4-2024 I have now released Chapter Four of Sylvan Courtyard. It seems well received. Thank you all. The series set up for it seems gorked, as it has been stuck in moderation hell since the start. Sorry! ————— 3-23-2024 Chapter Two of my new series, Sylvan Courtyard, is now p...