All Comments on 'Month of May 01'

Excellent part 2 please.

Love it, can't wait for part two!

Wow, had something similar happen a few months ago. I choose a different course of action, which was to call the cops and drag their ass thru the court system. Your version is much more fun to read about. Bitch gets what she gets. Short of real violence.

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Cheers

Good story, with some novel ideas. Readability could be better due to errors and odd constructions - just reading it out loud to yourself would get a lot of the issues. Try it for part 2!

The story has been updated to fix typos and grammar. Thanks for the comments so far!