All Comments on 'Mood Enhancement'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

very clever story

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
A few name mix ups...

...between Kate and Jane, but all in all, a fun story, and I gave it a five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
the best for a long time

but humour and parody would be better than mind control, or say almost any other cathegory. full points :-)

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 13 years ago
Finally a hypnotist that has a sense of fairplay....

....but much like Almagordo the genie is now in charge. Good luck to him!

garybluegaryblueover 11 years ago
Five stars

I'm not sure whether that is a fun story or a funny story. Perhaps a series of experiments … .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Superb Writing!

Imaginative sexual imagery compounded with heavy doses of humor. What's not to like?!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Such a good idea

And such good form. How did you manage to make it so dry?

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
A cute fantasy

Women tend to be very territorial when it comes to their men, as Kate is in this story. Reality would have her not allowing Adam to work with Jane on the theory at all. But fantasy allows one to ponder "What if" without causing consequences which could be very unpleasant.

I can see where a follow up story might be in order, especially as the tale is taking a detour into lesbianism. Any chance this can happen?

DevilbobyDevilboby8 months ago

A little lite muse.

This is a brill tale Max the more I explore your musings of times gone by the more I enjoy them your style of writing , very english, not pan continental no americanisms or Australianisms just pure englishness love it not wishing to alienate any of our transatlantic cousins but British humour is purely british as englishness likewise purely english the way you write demonstrates that and I love it so five stars to you Max and long may you continue.

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Dr. Max Cummings Born Maximilian Audacious Rollo Cummings on 29 April 1889 in what was then the British South Indies. Sent, at an early age, to boarding school in England, he moved successively from Linbury Court Prep. School to Greyfriars before matriculating, with the under...