by Drmaxc
...between Kate and Jane, but all in all, a fun story, and I gave it a five.
but humour and parody would be better than mind control, or say almost any other cathegory. full points :-)
....but much like Almagordo the genie is now in charge. Good luck to him!
I'm not sure whether that is a fun story or a funny story. Perhaps a series of experiments … .
Imaginative sexual imagery compounded with heavy doses of humor. What's not to like?!
Women tend to be very territorial when it comes to their men, as Kate is in this story. Reality would have her not allowing Adam to work with Jane on the theory at all. But fantasy allows one to ponder "What if" without causing consequences which could be very unpleasant.
I can see where a follow up story might be in order, especially as the tale is taking a detour into lesbianism. Any chance this can happen?
A little lite muse.
This is a brill tale Max the more I explore your musings of times gone by the more I enjoy them your style of writing , very english, not pan continental no americanisms or Australianisms just pure englishness love it not wishing to alienate any of our transatlantic cousins but British humour is purely british as englishness likewise purely english the way you write demonstrates that and I love it so five stars to you Max and long may you continue.