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RomanceLivesRomanceLivesover 1 year ago

Ooh I like this story. The Bree character is interesting in that she's a newbie who's having trouble getting it together, and gets picked on by her more experience coworkers. I like that, we have all been there, I think... I'm really looking forward to reading more about Bree and Eli.

tentaclesforalltentaclesforallover 1 year ago

Oooh, off to a great start, I'm going to like this!

Just enough worldbuilding and character exposition to make it all come together with very well-written dialog as well...

Looking forward to seeing the next chapter... and the next and the next...

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Greetings everyone! I occasionally write adult-oriented stories, which I will post here. I do enjoy writing, but I write many different things. Some of my current projects include producing the manuscript for a full-length novel that is book one of what should end up being a s...

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