All Comments on 'Most Important Aspect Of Seduction'

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MitchFraellMitchFraellover 8 years ago

I liked it but I can't believe that Gina would not have known about Robert and Marcia. Women always talk about these things.

daddy1950daddy1950over 8 years agoAuthor
Pleased you liked it Mitch

The explanation for the women not talking is in the text, but I know from years in a writer's workshop that readers often overlook detail, me included.

SpencerfictionSpencerfictionabout 7 years ago
Superb story

A most enjoyable story, nicely done.

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