All Comments on 'Mother Falls to Daughter’s BF Ch. 07'

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 1 year ago

What in the absolute fuck is this bullshit?

Did you have a lobotomy while writing this drek? We’re you drunk? I mean really! In the space of 15 minutes he controls everyone and not one goddamn person says “stop”?

This was about as erotic as watching paint dry.

DessertmanDessertmanabout 1 year ago

Absolutely dreadful.

MurseDMurseDabout 1 year ago

Great story. Glad to see you getting back to what made it a great series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Yes - he needs to bring his friends over & gang bang her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

i thought it was SICK!

OOAAOOAAabout 1 year ago

I would love tables turn and Frank took the bull by the horns......

26thNC26thNCabout 1 year ago

An ir piece of shit start to finish. Even Buster would be embarrassed to write this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

""One of these days I arrived home"" .... This is not how one of these days is used. It would be correct to say: ' one day I arrived home'.

fishgetterfishgetterabout 1 year ago

Dialogue, this reads like a story from a 4th grader. Difficult to follow and not very sexy, at all.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Love this! Hope there is more to come!

SteveRogers_SpSteveRogers_Sp8 months ago

I really enjoyed this saga

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I hope you write another chapter detailing a weekend with hust Carla and Miguel. Where he introduces Mrs. Dominate at home to a truly different shared sub life.

Loking forward to reading at least one more Carla experience.

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