All Comments on 'Mother-In-Law Gets Birthday Wish'

This started out in such a way that it could have been a very good story instead of being the # 3 (lenient) that I over-rated it. In short, it went from what could have been and should have been a nice and sexy-mature "HAIRY PUSSY," and or "MONSTER HAIRY PUSSY" mother-in-law fuck, to a nearly pointless waste of time. The set up ("mother-in-law") title, ALWAYS meaning a mature "hairy pussy" just like mom pussy, again always "hairy") was extremely misleading to readers (18 prior works listed and you don't know better (WTF) than that). I think I am going to go back and re-rate this one a 2. Yea, "I did" it's just a 2 and only because there is still potential to take it down and turn it into a real story and re-submit it. Mature and no pussy hair, pitiful!!!

OK, someone is reading way too much into this. Good story, could have spent more time on the sex than the set up but it did convey the urgency and lust both characters were feeling. Keep up the good work.