by iWriter4U
A nice turn of events in this chapter . I find your view of keeping things in the family interesting . It’s certainly taboo , yet I find it “ Soooo Erotic “ .
You should have his mom get pregnant too and have her sister show up on their door step so to speak and through that she gets the help she needs and turns her life around but in the process falls in love with him then she also gets pregnant and maybe somehow the wife also gets pregnant even when she somehow shouldn’t of
The whole story is good and exciting. But the only thing I didn’t like is why include the term “Bitch” specially for a mother even though she asked for it, and why would she?
Also for an elderly woman why is her pussy shaved? That’s mostly for younger women. And I’m not into it. I like hairy pussy.
In the future, I’m interested for a brother and sister engaged in intercourse while the husband and their moms watches.