All Comments on 'Mother Knows Best, Finally'

What a great story overall. Thanks for writing it.

Every dude's fantasy is being able to hypnotize women. So the premise of beautiful submissive women was alluring, but by the end my head was spinning and I couldn't tell who was hypnotized and who was doing what to who... But I read it all and liked it!! I cannot imagine how difficult this entire story was to write...

Loved the entire story arc and what a twist ending. I kinda hoped Chrisey would end up with Alexandra

The story over all was very good. The first page to this chapter was hard to get through as it was just so repetitive. I did believe earlier on that Caroline was the one in charge and I am glad I was right. I do wish Crissy and Alexandra would have been together but it turned out okay. The hardest thing to follow was the change in chapter titles. That was the reason for 4 stars instead of 5. I had to go into your bio constantly to look at dates to see which one came first. Thanks for the story.