All Comments on 'Mother Pays Son's Debt to Bully'

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JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 2 years ago

Ugh, mom is just a slut.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

you left off [cheating], [gutter slut] and [skank] tags for this pathetic story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

nice slut story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

So bad I can't believe I read it.

Stop writing, please.

FlynnTaggartFlynnTaggartalmost 2 years ago

Well that was just depressingly bad.

zodden1zodden1almost 2 years ago

Author, NTR stories generate hate from readers. Don't let them get to you. This story was a little short but an ok beginning overall. Keep it up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I think you have potential. Liked your second story too. Continue with that one, ignore critics. They probably have never written a word.

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