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At least I thought I could never repay it, until one day Quiet Sal unexpectedly called in his marker.
This story to be continued in Mother Road Ch. 8 -- Lost Highway
- COMMENTS
gopher255 months agoThis series started off well, but has gotten monotonous and boring as it went on.
EVLoverover 1 year agoWow, NewOldGuy77, you had me in quite an upset condition with the initial NY bar/hotel scene.
My mind/heart was screaming NO FUCKIN way!! When Walter walked out of the bar with his big hand on “Destiny’s” ass and then Tom headed upstairs with “Angel.” As it was late, I shut down literotica and went to bed in a thoroughly foul mood…wondering how this cheating was going to mesh with the rest of the story line.
When I got up to pee in the wee hours of the morning, it finally dawned on me that maybe, just maybe, you were teasing us with a variation of the “Pickup” fantasy that some couples have where they innocently meet at a bar or club, pick each up, and then head somewhere to fuck themselves senseless.
When I started rereading the story this morning, I was initially thrown off by the blonde hair…thinking/hoping it may have been wigs. I was relieved a short time later to find out that the blonde hair only was a dye job.
All remained right in the Mother Road world…or at least between Tom and Laura as well as between Walter and Dottie.
Thanks again for sharing your wonder writing gifts. Definitely another 5*****!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoWhen are you going to sell this on Amazon Kindle so I can buy it? I want the whole story, I'll pay eight bucks for a copy
JuanaSalsaabout 2 years agoGeeze, way to end on a cliff-hanger, lol. I feel bad for Josie =[ All around, loving this story, though!
