by hypnosissir
I would like to see Alexandra fully and permanently submitting to Caroline. A pecking order established of Vanessa first, then Caroline and the lowest slave being Alexandra. Perhaps even Alexandra wanting this. My only criticism is the use of Ma'am - in most English-speaking countries Ma'am is for a much older lady. I would like it more if Alexandra began to refer to her owners by the use of Mistress.
Forgot to say, I would also like to see Caroline develop a spine. She is very soft and wet. A bit of a drip, we would say in the UK.
I love this series, and wouldn't suggest changing anything so far. One more chapter to GO Snd curious to see how far down the rabbit hole mom goes??? I'm betting she goes ALL-IN...