All Comments on 'Mother's Window Ch. 04'

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live4thebjlive4thebjabout 1 year ago

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I recommend reading your work several times slowly and sort of read it out loud or inside your head. Some sentences didn’t make sense.

Aside from that not bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

If I'm fucking my mother, I'm going to whisper in her mouth...."The man in me wants to fuck his baby in you. I want to breed my woman. I want to breed my woman, my mother."

And my hope would be that she answers me...."Yes Tomas, fuck your beautiful baby in my belly. I'll give you beautiful babies Tomas. I'll give you beautiful handsome sons. Fuck your mother long and hard and give her your baby Tomas."

OI8U2OI8U29 months ago

I always love a good mother fucking.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Was kinda hoping he'll break her ass....

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

All mothers should let their sons fuck them let them knock them up couple of times tell their sons to that I am your whore and slut fuck them anytime let their son marry them

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Been reading stories here for a while, finally tried my hand at writing. I like it and seem to be decent at it. As I write more I'm going to try to cross over into other categories too.

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