All Comments on 'Mountain Loft Salon Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Seemed to go too easily. I think waking up and finding the changes he did would have more of a panic effect. His life had been altered in a drastic way.

SorotrickSorotrick2 months agoAuthor

I hear what you're saying. I will say I'm not completely done with the this story yet, so there may be more tumultuous moments in his future. But I wanted to convey that he was essentially rewritten; there's memories of what life used to be, but there's like a fog or a filter over them because primary motivations have been changed.

I personally find it very hot when a switch is flipped and suddenly the character has urges for things they didn't before.

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