All Comments on 'Mounting Ms. Johnson Ch. 02'

Love where this is going! Please continue?

loving this, great job. looking forward to more. i hope he gets the chance to include is other playmate into the mix.

Too short and nothing said. Two stars.

It was short but the point of the story was there are hidden desires in Mrs Johnson that were revealed to the story teller and had a sex scene... I didn't want to start a new story line, I prefer to just start a new chapter. I give your comment 1 star ⭐

I thought this was a great, almost perfect, encapsulation of the intensity of their connection, of her needs and drives. Bravo.

Another hot chapter!

5 Stars.

Good premise.

Much too truncated.

Sex much too lacking in details.

You wrote: ""Awe, poor thing. Maybe you should see to that." You meant AWW, not AWE.

Tags this chapter, but not helpful.

Three stars.

I don't like elaborate sex scenes, therefore I don't write them. I realize that some people want a story spoon-fed to them but I am just not one of those people, I prefer to read a story and let my imagination have it's way. Your editing critiques are spot on. I don't mind grammatical mistakes so much but hate misspells and wrong words.

Way too short, love the verbal interchange.