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Click here"Oh baby, that is so true. I don't regret a minute of it. If I can't think of a better way to express my love for you. It is our special bond." I replied with all honesty.
We lay there for some minutes. I lost any idea of the time.
"Dad, I'm all hot and sweaty, I reckon it's time for a swim," Betty declared as she wriggled from underneath me and headed to the pool.
I followed her and we both jumped in, the water was so refreshing after our exhausting love making.
We floated aimlessly.
There was a ring from Betty's mobile phone resting on the table by the pool.
She swam towards it and picked it up.
"Cathy darling!" Betty cried, clearly pleased to be hearing from her daughter.
"Cathy," she said, "I'm staying with your grandfather."
They chatted briefly then Betty called out to me.
"Dad, Cathy is on holidays from uni. She wants to come down and visit. Can she stay a few days with us?"
"Of course she can. It will be great to catch up with her," I yelled back.
Hmmm, I thought to myself, yes, it would be lovely to see Cathy, but this visit might not be like any that she has had in the past.
I think her mother and I need to have a bit of a talk.
- COMMENTS
Very_Useful_275 months agoVery enjoyable. Steady build-up to a happy climax for both father and daughter. Good pace, good story development, good descriptions of characters and events. I liked it a lot! Thank you for sharing your writing.
Htsl10 months agoA great story and I’m looking forward to reading the next part. 5/5
Don't be annoyed by such a weirdo. If he is a psychiatrist, he should give back his diploma and simply be happy with his own hair. I prefer a bald pussy, no matter what age. And the ladies also prefer a bald dick.
Tigersman10 months agoGreat story. The plot and character development were good as was the flow. As an editor, I've worked with authors from different countries. I always ask them if they prefer to keep their spelling and slang according to their native country. Keep writing.
Anonymous10 months agoDecaying society? Y’all never had one in the first place, bunch of paranoid island rats watching yourselves with more cctv than the Truman Show. Suppose there’s always tea time👍🏼
Anonymous10 months agoNaughtynurse121,
I really think the anonymous Psychiatrist really needs to have some therapy from a colleague haha, great story! Maybe a little more slower pace and seduction however 5 stars.
Anonymous10 months agoThe comments are as entertaining as the story; some fair, some just stupid. There are, for the most part, minor spelling and punctuation mistakes. Also minor plot issues but nothing to get twisted about. The shaved pussy issue is just stupid. Most women and a lot of men shave or trim regardless of age. The “mum” issue is also ludicrous. The writer is obviously not American as I’ve never heard an American say , “Oh bugger. . . “ At any rate, as one commenter mentioned, a writer with 36 stories and 600+ followers should do better. The story is average, a solid “3”.
KingKong202010 months agoIncredible plot you created sir. Fantastic story, gave 5 stars and can't wait to read future parts
Seebob6910 months agoAuthorAUTHOR
to the anonymous commentator who started his entry thus
"Quite a few silly mistakes that with the help of a editor, could be fixed..."
I could not let your comment go unanswered.
I sense that you have led a sheltered life and as such made a complete fool of yourself commenting on the grooming habits of women.
I can assure you that very many, if not indeed the majority of women, beyond their teen years, shave, trim, laser or in some fashion manicure their pubic hair.
Have you been to a nude beach, a clothing optional resort? Have you been on websites where mature women post naked pictures. Have you experienced group sex with mature women. I suspect not, because if you had, you would be aware of the prevalence of "bald pussies." I'm unsure how a qualification as a "psychiatrist" makes one an expert on the grooming habits of women.
I will continue to use MUM and irritate the likes of you who thinks nothing of importance exists beyond the borders of the USA. You are an embarrassment with your American Exceptionalism, unaware that the rest of the world witnesses with only passing interest, the decay of your society.
Finally, I am assuming that you have never posted a story to Literotica, because if you had, you would know that you MUST select the language that your story uses. There are Literotica stories in French, Spanish, German, Dutch ,Italian and other languages. Hence, there is a massive "international audience" of Literorica, who no doubt would not get their tits in a knot over the use of MUM.
Anonymous10 months agoVery nice. A little bit of background, a little character development, showing concern for each other. There's only so much you can develop a story in a couple of pages.
Re: difference in terminology between Commonwealth countries and the US, get over it. My impression is that about a third, maybe closer to a half, of the stories here are written by people outside the US so I expect the different terms, it's not as if you're having to read Beowulf in the original, or even Chaucer. If you're so sensitive that it upsets you or ruins the story for you, maybe stick to comic books.
Seebob, keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
