All Comments on 'Moving on With Two'

Hey there. You have a few spots where you put of instead of off. I suggest giving it a proof read. Other than that I'm enjoying it. (still part way through)

Here a nit I'd like to pick. The Rocky Mountain Vibes are a short season Class A ball team, not AAA. That was the Sky Sox before the relocated. You might be off on some of the details regarding is Alvin in the AFA. A bit of research into those kind of details help present the story.

Other than that, good work. I'll be watching for your next story.