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All Comments on 'Mr. Christian's House Ch. 01'

by dreamboatanni

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Christian OR Richardson???

NO mention of any Christian....yet??

Rapierwit24601Rapierwit24601almost 5 years ago
Excellent start

Well written, but you really should submit larger chunks, even if you are going to serialize the tale. To use a fishing axiom, you need to set the hook deeper.

Keep it coming - and quickly, too!

dreamboatannidreamboatanniover 4 years agoAuthor
Richardson or Christian--

Sorry about this misprint-- his name is Mr. Richardson. I went through a slew of names during writing and must have mixed one up.

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