All Comments on 'Mr. Right? Ch. 10'
by angelicsounds
- 16 Comments
theonlinestalkerover 14 years agoI'm glad you decided to give this story a proper ending. Everyone has their own Mr. Right. And hers was simply devine.
keikei2over 14 years agothis chapter was just so beautiful, if you do one more chapter they should definitly have some kids.... I love this story
LilMami07over 14 years agoI loved it!!! Its so cute how he planned their wedding without her knowing. When she put on the white dress, I was like "shucky ducky they bout to do the damn thing". I love the story and the characters. Good job!!
Anonymousover 14 years agoThis was a true love story. Staci and Matt are such an adorable couple. My heart my beating erratically waiting for her to read each note from Matt. He was so romantic. Loved this story.
Anonymousover 14 years agothat was a really great ending. the surprise wedding was a really romantis idea. Glad you finished this one, It was well worth the wait.
willing2exploreover 14 years agoWhat a wonderful ending. Matt is so sweet!!!! I didnt really see the full blown wedding coming at first. Great Job thanks so much for that submission
Anonymousover 14 years agoI loved every moment of it. Loved the dream wedding. Thank you so much for sharing your writings with us.
Anonymousover 14 years agoIts refreshing that you did not contrive a whole lot of situations to make it hard for this couple to be together. It was clear, to the point, but so romantic-great job!
Bklynmochaalmost 14 years agoi read the whole thing in one sitting, the story was good. I like the main character Stacia, she cared for him. but she didn't let him disrespect her as a woman. there are a lot of woman who need to learn that.
mimi186about 12 years agoEverytime I read this part of the story I have a little tear I love it!!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI really fell in love with Matt! Loved the wedding proposal and wedding all in one!
Comentarista82almost 9 years agoA surprise wedding with all that planning? How did YOU manage to write it all like this? That sweeps me off my feet!
Elaborate details I bask in. You make it so real, and that's a gift, with all the thoughts, emotions, brilliant repartee...incredible. Almost hard for me to believe it was 3 years later before they married.
Very well done.
