All Comments on 'Mr. Roberts'

Again, liked the premise. The vibrator going off in class — perfectly crazy fun. Great start to an erotic moment.

Hi, shadysweet,

Very nice job! This is a fun tale with some humor and a lot of eroticism. There were minor punctuation issues and I noted a couple of other things that might help if you're interested. Just let me know!

4.5*, rounded up.

SC

i liked an older man fucking a young girl. it is so easy to make them feel good when you know what to do and how to do it and they are young enough to be excited about what you are doing.

I love reading your stories!

Well, I was enjoying the story until I got to the “Daddy”, it was a real mood killer and I had to quit the story. Please please put that kind of thing in the Tags!!?

Tess (uk)

@anon

A very trivial thing to let ruin an entire story. Go read someone else's vanilla story, I'd suggest getting off the BDSM section. There's a reason this is my story and my page, because I love the word dadddy. LOL. Gotta love people going out of their way to ruin something for everyone else. Thanks for the comment and read! ;)