All Comments on 'Mr. Spencer Meets Her'

The story wasn't too bad but you definitely need to find an editor. There were a lot of misspellings and I found it to be wordy. A lot of mistakes, using he instead of her, etc. Keep writing, but get someone to proof your work.

This is a good story and have been checking back for updates periodically. If I may make one suggestion for you when writing. Check your tenses. Which is a VERY common mistake when one begins writing. A lot of the story you were using present tense narrative, which I would suggest not doing especially when using third person.

Example: She gets out of the tub, uses the towel to dry her body, then put on her nightgown and went to bed. Notice the tense change in one sentence? I used to do it ALL the time until a teacher pointed out and not picked it harder than grammar and spelling Lol! So I just wanted to offer the suggestion. Would love to see what happens next for Miss Candy and Mr. Spencer! The plot was intriguing and has great potential to develop and continue! Keep it up! ♡

Lovely work, I want this kind of daddy