All Comments on 'Mrs. Jones' Meter Reader'

The best kind of On The Job training!

5

Would have liked to have read more as MJ tutored him more in the arts of lovemaking and they shared more of life before she moved back to California. Possibly they could have stayed in touch. As Boyd Percy says that's On The Job Training. A sequel perhaps??

Lovely story, Trionyx. You did a great job with the young protagonist as he developed through the story, including his little asides about his feelings or memories. MJ's foreshadowing during their last encounter was well played too, and their sexual exploration felt right and appropriate for the time. Great job with the challenge and 5*.

What a beautiful coming of age story! 5*+++

It was a beautiful story. It is a shame they only had that brief time but if every story had them living happily ever after, that would be less precious. Thank you for sharing this.

Great stuff! The ending made me sad but isn't that the way of life and love?

Exactly what I would expect a "first time" story to be like, and I enjoyed how you "tutored" Charlie with Mrs. Jones; he may not have learned algebra well, but he learned how to please her quickly. You set it up and finished it as a "partial" tragedy to end the romance, having her move away. Charming little tale, although I had hoped you would have left it open for her to return from CA and pick up with him once she finished caring for her parent (what the OP said was right on). Tons more could have happened had he gone to CA, as no one would have guessed he was a former student unless he let it slip...and even at that time, with her being in a different district and state, there was no chance of her getting in trouble then. 5

Fun and neat story

Time for part two where they reunite.

Nice!

Loved it ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Would love another chapter please? I just feel as though poor Charlie will never get over MJ for the rest of his life……I don’t know…..I just like happy endings.

Man i really loved this story!

Five Stars! For some reason, it wouldn’t let me record a vote…… but I really liked it so here it is ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Very enjoyable. Well done.

Well done. I liked the character development and the colloquialisms, made the dialogue real. As you said in your comment on my story it is interesting we both had the woman run off to California but I remember way back then California was looked at as the promised land. I put you in my favorites to read more of your works later. Thanks for sharing.

My kind of story. Experiencing first love is the best part of growing up. Thanks so much for writing this narrative in your peculiar way. Five Stars!

Good story I liked the way you did the spelling kind of felt sorry for the guy would like to know if he found a girl and how he met her. Just a thought.

Lovely story, a very great teacher and done in a very sensitive matter of instruction with a little romance thrown in. Really enjoyed reading this story.

You are a good storyteller. I really enjoyed the dialogue and the pace of this story.

I like your style, 5 stars.