All Comments on 'Mrs. McGregor's Tawse Ch. 06'

by MarkKane

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

in summary, Then...

then.... then..... then.... then..... then... then....

If the evens described are in chronological order, perhaps most or all of the "then" words could be eliminated? Try it without the extra unnecessary words.

thekeenreaderthekeenreaderabout 2 years ago

He is totally broken isn't he. No resistance now despite being humiliated and scandalised every waking hour

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