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DquiotiDquioti9 months ago

Nice story, likable characters, looking forward to the next chapter. Constructive criticisms: need a better descriptions of our main characters, the timeline is a little wonky, could use more build up in their interaction and a little more descriptive playing. Like the story but wanted a little more.

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(I have submitted short(er) stories involving my characters on Reddit and CHYOA but I submit to here too now) Stories about MILFs and Matures.

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