All Comments on 'Ms. Julie Ch. 06: The Consequence'

The chapters seem to be getting shorter and shorter. I am sure that this story would be much better received if your chapters were not broken into micro chapters.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

I just started reading your writing love it!!!! Looking forward to getting locked in chasity & lots of pussy licking

Thanks for the input. Failedscout. This story just seemed to need a lot of cliffhangers. If the same stories were organized in a series format, with links from one to the next, would that address your concern? As a first time poster, I messed up the series process . I decided to publish these as stand alones rather than spend time figuring out how to fix the series.