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Casual_Writer21Casual_Writer2110 months ago

I have a few things to say.

1. I'm not fond of this chapter because Jess' interrogation seems too forced and unnatural.

2. The chapter is so short that I don't have time to settle into the world. You break my immersion when I have to go to the next chapter after three minutes.

I will continue to give this story a chance by reading the next part.

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I've authored a number of books related to female muscle and female muscle growth and recently found literotica. I look forward to writing more shorts here and receiving feedback.

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