All Comments on 'mw4mw'
by availableslave2u
- 10 Comments
sigafoosabout 13 years agoThoroughly enjoyed this one, but not as much as Katie obviously did! I want to be her...
Anonymousabout 13 years agoLove the story slavey..sighh..someday that could be us working it with each other and another couple...specially here in Mass..from you know who!
ucleeboabout 13 years agoVery hot sex scenes and good character development. You do very nice work as2u!
I look forward to your next excursion into that kinky mind of yours.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoThe sex was good, but somehow didnt get turned on, maybe because there was not too much description of what the characters were feeling. I dont think I have managed to explain too well but you write well and I dont want you too feel bad about this
fire_breezeabout 13 years agoI thought it was hot the first time I've read it and still think it is!
availableslave2uabout 13 years agoAuthorThank you all for your comments. It is encouraging to me to get comments and feedback, so I know what you're thinking. To the anon who said there was too much of what the characters were thinking....thank you for your point of view. In my point of view, it is important in certain parts of the story to know what the characters are thinking. I'm not 100% sure I understand what you're trying to say. If you'd like to send me feedback, perhaps I can try to understand.
Anonymousover 12 years agoVery well written hunny, while BDSM isn't my first choice..your writing is incredibly detailed, you painted the picture quiet well..I could "see" every movement in my mind!
