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by IslaQuinn

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Excellent story, hot sex. The only issue is you keep switching between past and present tense, which doesn't really work for first-person pov writing. Other than that, one of the best stories/series I've read in a long time.

DansilverDansilver8 months ago

A very arousing story

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Hi there! My name is Isla. I love writing erotica! I plan to work on a couple different series as I have the time. You can check out my books and erotica shorts on Amazon here: https://amazon.com/wd/e/B0CK52VJNK

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