by OzEliot
Great story!!! I started this morning with a couple of other stories that I wanted to read today. I saw this story and decided to tag it for a later read. You did a great job from the very beginning of this story and it snagged me and it would not let me go!!! This story is very nicely written, it has a wonderful pace, it has great suspense, it is believable, and it is nicely erotic. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful story!!!
Jesus, This is the hottest thing I've read on this website in a long time. Good work.
I started to share an opinion about Emily but I had second thoughts. I can’t wait to see how you handle her. I do hope that you maintain the strength and depth of your characters!
One word: Amazing! Thank you so much for this story. I'm rooting for the polygamy-route with Emily AND Liz - so no feelings get hurt :)
Thanks for the encouraging reviews. It's been a long time since I submitted anything to the site because I've had a number of unfinished stories and I like to have them done before posting them. The next part of this story (it should be 3 in total) has already been submitted to Literotica and will probably post soon. I hope the questions or hopes for Emily are realized in the final chapter in a way that satisfy. Again, the positive comments are much appreciated.
Such a well written story. So interesting and exciting, with just the right amount of build up and tension. Well done!
Insanely hot! Loved the reveal of Liz's exposure in the movie! Very erotic.