All Comments on 'My Black Friend's Gay Brother Ch. 01'

You asked for constructive criticism,

"I'm not doing, Brian. My cock isn't your plaything." Jack said.

this should be

"I'm not doing Brian. My cock isn't your plaything", Jack said.

And how did he say it?

"I'm not doing Brian. My cock isn't your plaything", Jack said sternly!

A good story but I'm having trouble at times determining who is doing the talking as some statements don't list who is making them.

Leloine, I just learned a new word; 'sternly'. Thank you. My English is so bad, I'm still learning new words and phrases. And grammar is my enemy.

I wish Brian would do with these black Brothers want give him the hand job and also get their dicks into his mouth and just like a girl when they want him to make it like the other thing you have where the brother change them into a family world world